Kinzoku [Jutsu Registry]

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Kinzoku wrote:

Name: Steel Release: Iron Fist
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Steel
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -5 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 2
Description: One of the cornerstones of Steel Release, the user simply draws a fist and covers it in a coating of metal. This enhances the damage output significantly by raising the weight of the fist; taking a simple punch and making it able to snap even the hardest bones and leaving severe blunt force trauma. Extreme pain, deep tissue damage, bruising over large areas, broken bones, and internal bleeding are almost guaranteed.


Name: Steel Release: Iron Stick
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-SS
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Element: Steel
Range: Melee
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post for creation, weapon lasts until dropped, destroyed, or battle ends
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: The user pools excess metal into their hand and forms it into a weapon; usually similar to a police baton or quarter staff (allowed forms depend on user's specializations). The weapon has all the power, damage output, and defensive properties of the metal it is made out of, and requires the same amount of damage to be destroyed. However, if the user loses contact with the weapon, it will instantly rust and crumble into nothing, no matter what rank or metal it is. Only ONE weapon created this way can exist at any given moment; in order to create another the existing must be destroyed and the cooldown period followed.

Name: Gale
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: This technique is a good example of how even simple taijutsu can become a pre-eminently destructive, lethal technique. The attack is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.


Name: Whirlwind
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: A taijutsu technique where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint. The attack can be performed airbone and while running


Name: Rising Wind
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: This technique uses the entire body as a spring, by amassing power through taking a posture where the back of the body falls down. With this powerful taijutsu, the user kicks just above the head. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky.


Name: Great Whirlwind
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: This technique is a series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks.

Okay, you'll need to check the updated jutsu rules, the durational cost for C-Rank is now 10 per post, not 5.

Iron Fist needs a damage reduction. Steel release or not, it's overpowered for the damage balance on site. C- rank can crack large bones, but only break small ones. You'll get mild internal bleeding, not major. The bruising and pain is fine.

Iron Stick is approved, however you can only take it if you have the freebie tokens to cover the ranks. If you don't, you'll have to train it, or wait until you do.

We've made a new tai library with the canon techs. Grab those, since these are the same jutsu with changed names.

Re-bump

Kinzoku wrote:

Name: Steel Release: Iron Fist
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Steel
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -10 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 2
Description: One of the cornerstones of Steel Release, the user simply draws a fist and covers it in a coating of metal. This enhances the damage output significantly by raising the weight of the fist; taking a simple punch and making it able to snap small bones and leaving blunt force trauma. Mild pain, moderate tissue damage, bruising over large areas, cracked bones, and internal bleeding are almost guaranteed.

Name: Steel Release: Iron Foot
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Steel
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -10 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 2
Description: One of the cornerstones of Steel Release, the user simply covers a foot (Up to the ankle) in a coating of metal. This enhances the damage output significantly by raising the weight of the foot; taking a simple kick and making it able to snap small bones and leaving blunt force trauma. Mild pain, moderate tissue damage, bruising over large areas, cracked bones, and internal bleeding are almost guaranteed.


Name: Steel Release: Iron Stick
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-SS
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Element: Steel
Range: Melee
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post for creation, weapon lasts until dropped, destroyed, or battle ends
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: The user pools excess metal into their hand and forms it into a weapon; usually similar to a police baton or quarter staff (allowed forms depend on user's specializations). The weapon has all the power, damage output, and defensive properties of the metal it is made out of, and requires the same amount of damage to be destroyed. However, if the user loses contact with the weapon, it will instantly rust and crumble into nothing, no matter what rank or metal it is. Only ONE weapon created this way can exist at any given moment; in order to create another the existing must be destroyed and the cooldown period followed.


Name: Choke Slam (Nodowa Otoshi - 喉輪  落とし)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user grabs the opponent's throat clenching it, and then throws them onto the ground with a violent force.


Name: Leaf Gust (Konoha Toppū - 木ノ葉突風)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Using simple, yet effective strikes, the user begins to spin rapidly and with a strong rotative high kick hits the opponent.


Name: Leaf Whirlwind (Konoha Senpū - 木ノ葉旋風)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint.


Name: Opening Stone Rose (Kaikai-Seki Bara - 開会石バラ)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: This technique consist of a very simple, but powerful, kick delivered to the side of the opponent - aimed at causing damage to the ribs. A powerful user of Taijutsu can use this technique to break a rib with relative ease.


Name: Leaf Great Whirlwind (Konoha Daisenpū - 木ノ葉大旋風)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This technique is a series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks.

All approved.

Bump to learn this, deduct the 300 ryo at will plz

Kinzoku wrote:

Name: Afterimage Technique (Zanzō no Jutsu, 残像の術)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: -20 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 4
Description: The Afterimage Technique (残像の術, Zanzō no Jutsu) is a technique that allows one to move so swiftly that they leave behind a distinct afterimage of their person behind so as to trick an opponent into thinking they have not moved from their original position. The image itself cannot move as it fades through everything that moves toward it. In most cases, it is used to dodge an incoming attack and get behind the opponent to perform a counterattack, but it isn't limited to just that as it can also be used to confuse enemies. It can be used to distract the enemy, giving the user a chance to perform the actual attack.

Okay, I'm real iffy on allowing this, as its basicly a free 'in-battle' use of Body Flicker. I'm going to break this down as I see the problems with it.

First off, this will not be allowed as maintainable. Thats just begging to be abused and spammed in a fight. If we allow this, its going to be a one post duration with at least a five post cooldown.

This is going to require a set SPD and/or REA difference between you and your opponent to use. For example, If your opponent has A-2 SPD/REA, you yourself must have at least S-2 SPD [a one rank difference] to be able to pull this off. Remember, here a persona's perception ability is tied to thier REA stat. The higher thier REA, the better they are able to read thier surroundings and react. A person with a high enough REA WILL render this technique useless against them as they will almost instantly know that this is a false image.

Seeing as you state that this allows a person to move swiftly, you're going to need to state how much it boosts the SPD stat in the moment its used than normal movement. Bump again when you've made the changed.

Ok, as the afterimage technique needs worked on, Hot Fist Bump instead.

Kinzoku wrote:

Name: Hot Fist (Nekkiken - 熱気拳)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: The user focuses their chakra into their arms and fists and condenses it until it heats up to the point of causing steam to leak from their pores. The user then fires a massive number of high speed punches at the target, which when combined with the superheated chakra and steam heating of the air around the user and target creates the perfect storm of extreme physical trauma and severe burns. The target is almost guaranteed to suffer catastrophic internal injuries as well as second and third degree burns over a significant portion of their body.

Approved. Will deduct when trained.

Training Bump.

Kinzoku wrote:

Hot Fist Training:

Approved. Remember your rank restrictions.

Special Characteristic "Calm," Rasengan, Shadow Clone, and Ninjutsu Training Bump

Shadow Clone costs 250 Ryo

Rasengan costs 300 Ryo

Deduct at will

Kinzoku wrote:

Special Characteristic "Calm," Rasengan, Shadow Clone, and Ninjutsu Training Bump

Shadow Clone costs 250 Ryo

Rasengan costs 300 Ryo

Deduct at will

Ryo deducted, Rasengan, Shadow Clone, and Ninjutsu training approved.

Note about the SC in admin thread.

Trainings Bump

Training approved, ryo deducted.

Zen Mode bump (300 ryo, deduct at will)

Training found here.

Kinzoku wrote:

Name: Steel Release: Zen Mode
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Element: Steel
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -25 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 5, Twice per thread.
Description: In times of extreme danger, the user is able to assume a special meditative position and coat their entire body in high-carbon steel; raising their defenses by a massive amount. All Taijutsu below B-rank is rendered useless; all Suiton and Fuuton jutsu are negated. Doton of S-rank or higher can crush and damage the user; while all Katon damage is boosted an additional 1 rank above normal (+2 total). Raiton of B-rank or higher will cause normal damage, while piercing Raiton of S-rank or higher will damage and cause the metal coating to shatter. Raiton below B-rank will merely be absorbed by the metal coating and transfered to a grounding point.

When was this approved, and by whom? You're missing required information here; it has to be stated anytime that a jutsu can boost damage and such that it cannot boost above S-Rank. I can understand stopping the initial damage from Suiton and Fuuton, but you have to keep in mind that you can still drown/suffocate in relation to Water and Wind.

Zen Mode Re-Bump

Zen Mode was never officially approved

I figured i'd just turn everything in at once, the jutsu and the training, instead of apping the jutsu and having to wait 12-13 hours or an entire day to have it modded, then turning in the training and having to wait another 12-13 hours or another entire day before it's approved

As i've already used this method before and no one complained, I didn't think it would be an issue

Kinzoku wrote:

Name: Steel Release: Zen Mode
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Element: Steel
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -25 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 5, Twice per thread.
Description: In times of extreme danger, the user is able to assume a special meditative position and coat their entire body in pure steel; raising their defenses by a massive amount. All Taijutsu below B-rank is rendered useless; all Suiton and Fuuton jutsu are negated (although the user can still be drowned and/or suffocated.) Doton of S-rank or higher can crush and damage the user, while all Katon damage toward the user is boosted an additional 1 rank above normal (+2 total). Raiton of B-rank or higher will cause normal damage, while piercing Raiton of S-rank or higher will damage and cause the metal coating to shatter. Raiton below B-rank will merely be absorbed by the metal coating and transferred to a grounding point.

You seem to be missing a core weakness with steel release. Yes, Katon will do more damage to steel release, but Raiton is also a weakness, as metal conducts electricity. Raiton would pass straight through the steel as if it were not there, dealing damage as normal for its ranking.

Reactivation Bump

Kinzoku wrote:

Name: Steel Release: Zen Mode
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Element: Steel
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -25 chakra per post
Cooldown: Duration + 5, Twice per thread.
Description: In times of extreme danger, the user is able to assume a special meditative position and coat their entire body in pure steel; raising their defenses by a massive amount. All Taijutsu below B-rank is rendered useless; all Suiton and Fuuton jutsu are negated (although the user can still be drowned and/or suffocated.) Doton of S-rank or higher can crush and damage the user, while all Katon damage toward the user is boosted an additional 1 rank above normal (+2 total); Raiton damage - C-Rank and above - toward the user is too boosted an additional 1 rank above normal (+2 total). A-rank or higher will damage and cause the metal coating to shatter.

Name: Iron Suspension
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Range: /
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: Until canceled or destroyed
Cooldown: Double the posts used
Description: It is a trick where he uses the chakra-enhanced Iron Sand to support his own weight and float in mid-air and to use as a method of transportation if needed. By increasing the size of the platform Kinzoku can transport others along with him or even grant some one else their own platform of Iron Sand to fly on. (Chakra Cost: 25, 20 to maintain for every turn)


Name: Magnet Release: Attraction Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: Close (0m – 5m) Mid (5m - 10m)
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: A basic Magnet Release technique that allows the user to attract magnetized objects. The technique has many different applications and can be used in many different situations. (Chakra cost: 10)


Name: Magnet Release: Repulsion Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: Close (0m – 5m) Mid (5m - 10m)
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: A basic Magnet Release technique that allows the user to repel magnetized objects, with varying amounts of force. The technique has many different applications and can be used in many different situations. (Chakra cost: 15)


Name: Magnet Release: Magnet Weapon
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Element: -
Range: Mid range (5m – 10m)
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: The user magnetizes a metallic weapon(s) of their choosing, then throws them in the direction of their opponent. Any individual that comes into direct contact with these weapons are themselves magnetized; as such, it is crucial that the opponent avoids all of them as even a single deflection will result in the production of a powerful magnetic field around their body. Once the person has been magnetized, the user can manipulate the magnetic field in such a manner as to make any subsequent attack using a metallic weapon impossible to evade. The user will also be subject to attraction and repulsion techniques. (Chakra cost: 20)


Name: Iron Sand Drizzle (砂鉄時雨 Satetsu Shigure)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: All ranges
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: It is a gunshot-like attack which uses Iron Sand hardened into minuscule grains to attack simultaneously across a vast range. The bullets are so fast that they are difficult to see. After clotting together Iron Sand into countless small lumps, Kinzoku uses them to attack an enemy from every direction. Because all the sand lumps are controlled by chakra, it is possible to commence an attack without any blind spots. The moment the user has finished preparing the attack, (Lasting 1 post) evading it becomes extremely difficult. If interrupted while preparing, the user must start again. Using the repellent force of magnetism, the speed of the bullets is rapidly increased after they are shot. Furthermore, the user can also use an attack pattern where the Iron Sand bullets are shaped into sharp needles, increasing their ability to wound or kill the opponent. Since the Iron Sand has a magnetic force (and can be also drenched in poison), defending against this technique is almost impossible. This technique is especially threatening to puppet users, since the puppets can be rendered immobile if the Iron Sand gets lodged into their joints. (Chakra Cost: 25)


Name: Kurogane Soutei Kan (Iron Binding Coffin)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: Close (0m – 5m) Mid (5m - 10m)
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: With his ability to control metal, Kinzoku encases his opponents in a large amount of the special chakra-infused Iron Sand kept inside his gourd, immobilising them. It can be used to suffocate an opponent or in preparation for a deadlier technique. (Chakra cost: 25)


Name: Kurogane Taki Sōgi (Iron Waterfall Funeral)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: After wrapping an opponent with Iron Sand with either Iron Binding Coffin or Iron Drizzle, Kinzoku will cause the Iron Sand to implode and crush whatever is within it. When used to kill a person, the death is so quick that there isn't even time for the victim to feel any pain. The pressure also produces a sizeable fountain of blood. Kinzoku can control the pressure used in the attack, which allows him to either break bones or completely liquefy an opponent. (Chakra cost: 25)


Name: Manipulation
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Element: -
Range: Close (0m – 5m) Mid (5m -10m)
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: Double the posts used
Description: Kinzoku can manipulate his Iron Sand into doing anything he can imagine, at the cost of 1 complete post to be used as preperation. It serves for a variety of functions. He can create “hands” and “arms” out of Iron Sand, and use them to either attack, or defend attacks up to A-rank and lower. Kinzoku can cause the Iron Sand to travel underground and mix with the minerals to create more Iron Sand, or to set up sneak attacks. The longer the preparation, the more powerful the attack. (Chakra Cost: 25, with an additional 25 per post when creating more Iron Sand)


Name: Gold Dust Waterfall Flow
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: All ranges
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 2-3 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Kinzoku causes a considerable quantity of Gold Dust to erupt from beneath the surface, by placing both of his palms onto the ground directly in front of him, before manipulating the resulting substance into a wave of tidal proportions. 2 to 3 posts are needed to gather and manipulate the required amount of Gold, and Kinzoku is stll left free to attack or defend during the process. (Chakra Cost: 30)


Name: Iron Sand Gathering Assault
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Element: -
Range: All Ranges
Specialty: Magnet Release
Duration: 2 posts (1 post to form) can be used until destroyed or dispersed
Cooldown: Double the posts used
Description: The Iron Sand Gathering Assault is a technique which gathers a great volume of Iron Sand and compresses it into a high-density shape.
Usage
This technique greatly increases the hardness, creating a gigantic steel-like weapon in an instant. The weight and size of these shapes are so great, they can easily shatter bedrock and break through most defenses with one hit.
Because the weapon is made out of Iron Sand, the shape can be whatever the user wants, and can even be changed during the fight. This allows the user to create the best weapon for the fight, by taking into account the opponent's abilities and the surrounding environment. Since the Iron Sand generates a strong magnetic field, the opponent cannot use any metal weapons or tools. (Chakra Cost: 30)

Name: Iron Sand Dome
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-S
Type: Defensive
Element: Magnet Release
Range: Close
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Magnet Release
Duration: Until cancelled
Cooldown: 3 posts (Double the duration or longer)
Description: A simple jutsu, Kinzoku creates a dome of iron sand slightly taller than he is, in a 3 meter radius around him. The dome is capable of protecting him from all attacks of his rank or lower while maintained, with attacks at the same rank as the dome creating a momentary opening through which a followup may be launched before the dome reforms itself on Kinzoku's post if maintained. This jutsu also intensifies Kinzoku's magnetic field, and any metallic assaults on the barrier will result in the weapon(s) being launched back at their point of origin with the same speed they struck the dome, and melee weapons will be ripped from the hands of the owner and thrown roughly 5 meters from the barrier.

Approval granted

Got a few requests, hopefully my last. I increased specs, elements and stats.

Trained Tai from S to SS. Training thread here.
Total Words Needed: 8,000
Total Words Typed: 8,576

Trained Nin from S to SS. Training thread here.
Total Words Needed: 8,000
Total Words Typed: 8,921

Trained Steel from S to SS. Training thread here.
Total Words Needed: 6,000
Total Words Typed: 6,333

Trained SPD from S3 to SS3. Training thread here.
Total Words Needed: 32,500
Total Words Typed: 32,740

Trained STR from S3 to SS2. Training thread here.
Total Words Needed: 21,500
Total Words Typed: 22,675

Trained REA from S3 to SS2. Training thread here.
Total Words Needed: 21,500
Total Words Typed: 21,990

Thanks in advance.

Training is approved.