Amara [Jutsu Registry]

Jounin (A-Rank) Posts : 135 Join date : 2015-04-20

Name: Bubble Barrier
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C - A
Type: Offensive
Element: Suiton | Raiton
Range: C: 15 Meters | B: 20 Meters | A: 25 Meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: C: 2 Posts | B: 3 Posts | A: 4 Posts
Cooldown: C: 3 Posts | B: 4 Posts: | A: 5 Posts
Description: The user blows out a large amount of raiton infused bubbles. These bubbles surround the user, effectively creating a sort of barrier between themselves and those around that is in a 3 meter radius of the creator. These bubbles are roughly the size of a basketball, and can be spaced as far apart as one foot, or as close together as touching. Once these bubbles are created they cannot be moved or controlled by the creator (save for a wind jutsu, or fanning them in a particular direction, ect.). The damage these bubbles inflict when touched or popped varies depending on their rank. These bubbles will last a specific number of posts depending on their rank, or until they're all popped. Incidentally, the creator of these bubbles is completely immune to damage from them.
C Rank: Bubbles of this rank are capable of causing first degree electrical burns upon contact, per bubble. These burns will roughly be 2 inches in diameter, but only surface deep. (Creates 50 bubbles)
B Rank: Bubbles of this rank are capable of causing second degree electrical burns upon contact, per bubble. Anyone who touches a bubble of this rank will experience a stunning effect of one post. The burns caused by these bubbles will be 2 inches in diameter, and roughly half an inch deep into the skin. Touching, or being touched with more then five bubbles at this rank will cause excessive heart damage and brain damage – if not treated in five posts by a Medic of B rank or higher it will mean certain death. (Creates 75 bubbles)
A Rank: Bubbles of this rank are capable of causing third degree electrical burns upon contact, per bubble. Anyone who touches a bubble of thise rank will experience a stunning effect of two posts. The burns caused by these bubbles will be 3 inches in diameter, and roughly half an inch deep into the skin. Touching, or being touched with more then three bubbles at this rank will cause excessive heart damage and brain damage – if not treated in three posts by a Medic of A rank or higher it will mean certain death. (Creates 100 bubbles)

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27

Approved. <3

Jounin (A-Rank) Posts : 135 Join date : 2015-04-20

Name: Underwater Breathing
Type: Personal
Description: The user is so in-tune with their natural Suiton element that they are capable of breathing underwater, and remaining underwater indefinitely. This cannot be used in combat.

Training for Underwater Breathing can be found here.

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27

Kaia wrote:: Name: Underwater Breathing
Type: Personal
Description: The user is so in-tune with their natural Suiton element that they are capable of breathing underwater, and remaining underwater indefinitely. This cannot be used in combat.

Training for Underwater Breathing can be found here.

Approved.

Jounin (A-Rank) Posts : 135 Join date : 2015-04-20

Bumping for all of those jutsu...

Jounin (A-Rank) Posts : 135 Join date : 2015-04-20

24+ hour bumpy!

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27

Kaia wrote:: Name: Unrelenting Force
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B - SS
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: 0 – 10 Meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description: Unrelenting Force is the very first shout learned by the Dragonborn. This shout is the most often used for most of the Dovahkiin clan as it comes in handy during most situations. The strength of this Thu’um depends on the strength of the Dovahkiin, as it grows in power as they learn more words (rank up).
B – Rank: "Fus!" Hitting someone with the Unrelenting Force shout will cause a knock back effect of 2 meters. It can only be used on one person at a time. This is handy when used against an opponent who uses physical attacks as it can cause them to lose their balance, thus interrupting their attack. The words must be spoken for the jutsu to work.
A – Rank: "Fus Ro!" Hitting someone with the Unrelenting Force shout will not only cause a knock back effect of 3 meters but will also interrupt any jutsu the opponent might be attempting to perform. This can be performed on two people at the same time so long as they’re within three meters of each other.
S – Rank: "Fus Ro Dah!" Hitting someone with Unrelenting Force at this rank will cause anyone within a seven meters of the intended target to go flying backwards, off their feet, for 5 meters. This will cause them to suffer environmental damage, and will stun any of those affected for their next post. If used near a cliff or high drop this will cause them to also suffer fall damage or even death if the area is high enough up.
SS – Rank: "Fus Ro Dah!" Hitting someone with Unrelenting Force at this rank will cause the same knock back effect as before, however anyone not wearing A-Rank or higher armor will be incinerated (turned to ash) by the sheer volatile force of this jutsu.

Name: Whirlwind Sprint
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-S
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: All Ranges
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description: Whirlwind Sprint is a shout that causes you to rush forward at great speed. It can be used even if you are overencumbered. This shout carries you horizontally, so do not use it to go down slopes; you will find yourself in mid-air when the sprint ends.
B Rank: "Wuld!" This word will cause you to rush forward 50 feet with a +1 to your overall speed.
A Rank: "Wuld Nah!" At this rank you will rush forward 75 feet with a +2 to your overall speed.
S Rank: "Wuld Nah Kest!" At this rank you will rush forward 100 feet with a +2 to your overall speed.

Name: Slow Time
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-S
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1-3 Posts
Cooldown: 2-6 Posts
Description: Slow Time is a Thu'um that gives those of the Dovahkiin clan the ability to see things in slower time; increasing for a brief period of time their perception of the events going on around them so long as it is within their eyesight.
B Rank: "Tiid!" When used the user can see things as if time has slowed down around them, allowing them to pull of feats otherwise not thought possible: such as precieving attacks aimed at them, or even plucking an arrow out of the air. This lasts for 1 post. Cooldown is 2 posts.
A Rank: "Tiid Klo!" When used the user can see things as if time has slowed down around them, allowing them to pull of feats otherwise not thought possible: such as precieving attacks aimed at them, or even plucking an arrow out of the air. This lasts for 2 post. Cooldown is 4 posts.
S Rank: "Tiid Klo Ul!" When used the user can see things as if time has slowed down around them, allowing them to pull of feats otherwise not thought possible: such as precieving attacks aimed at them, or even plucking an arrow out of the air. This lasts for 3 post. Cooldown is 6 posts.

Name: Dragon Aspect
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B - SS
Type: Supplementary | Defensive
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 - 8 Posts
Cooldown: 4 - 16 Posts
Description: Dragon Aspect is a Thu'um that improves your resistance to damage by creating an armor. The stronger the shout is the stronger that the armor is, the more of the body it covers, and the longer it lasts. This jutsu provides protection against physical attacks as well as jutsu attacks of the rank used and lower.
B Rank: "Mul!" This causes an armor to appear around the users arms that is of B rank in strength. This armor protects against jutsu and physical attacks of B rank and lower. This armor lasts 2 posts. This has a cooldown of 4 posts.
A Rank: "Mul Qah!" This causes an armor to appear around the users arms and head that is of A rank in strength. This armor protects against jutsu and physical attacks of A rank and lower. This armor lasts 4 posts. This has a cooldown of 8 posts.
S Rank: "Mul Qah Diiv!" This causes an armor to appear around the user that covers their entire top half of their body (from the waist and up). This armor protects against jutsu and physical attacks of S rank and lower. This armor lasts 6 posts. This has a cooldown of 12 posts.
SS Rank: "Muh Qah Diiv!" This causes an armor to appear around the user that covers their entire body. This armor protects against SS rank attacks (up to a total of 3). After this limit has been reached it will only protect against S rank attacks and lower. This armor lasts for 8 posts. This has a cooldown of 16 posts.

Name: Disarm
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B - SS
Type: Supplementary | Defensive
Element: /
Range: Medium
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description: Disarm is a shout that pulls the weapon out of an opponent's grasp. The rank at which the user can use this jutsu will depend on who all can be disarmed and how many people at a time. When the opponent is disarmed their weapon, no matter what rank is used, will go flying fifteen meters away from them. This can only be used when the user is within 15 meters of someone.
B Rank: "Zun" This can only be used on 1 person at a time. Only Chuunin and lower can be disarmed with this shout.
A Rank: "Zun Haal" This can only be used on 2 people at a time. Only Special Jounin and lower can be disarmed with this shout.
S Rank: "Zun Haal Viik" This can only be used on 3 people at a time. Only Jounin [A] and lower can be disarmed with this shout.
SS Rank: "Zun Haal Viik" This can only be used on 4 people at a time. Only Jounin [S] and lower can be disarmed with this shout.

Name: Become Ether
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B - S
Type: Supplementary | Defensive
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 - 3 Posts
Cooldown: 2 - 6 Posts
Description: Become Ethereal is a dragon shout that turns you into an ethereal form. While in this form, you cannot deal damage or take damage (including damage from falls or poison). Attempting to interact with the world, via fighting, accessing a container, or talking to an NPC, causes the effects of the shout to stop working.
B Rank: "Feim" You can become ethereal for up to 1 post, protected against all damage.
A Rank: "Feim Zii" You can become ethereal for up to 2 posts, protected against all damage.
S Rank: "Feim Zii Gron" You can become ethereal for up to 3 posts, protected against all damage.

Unrelenting Force and Whirlwind Sprint approved.

The Slow Time one would basically be a boost to REA stat. Adjust it so that it reads as such.

The armor one is nice, but I'm going to have to ask that you pay per post active.

Disarm approved.

I'm not against the Ether shout, but... to be fair I'm going to ask that you make this cost double normal costs. I know you can't attack or interact, but getting what is essentially invulnerability is going to cost.

Jounin (A-Rank) Posts : 135 Join date : 2015-04-20

Bumping for fixes.

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27

Kaia wrote:

Approved, Awaiting Training:

Name: Slow Time
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-S
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1-3 Posts
Cooldown: 2-6 Posts
Description: Slow Time is a Thu'um that gives those of the Dovahkiin the ability to see things in slower time; increasing for a brief period of time their perception of the events going on around them so long as it is within their eyesight.
B Rank: "Tiid!" When used the user can see things as if time has slowed down around them, allowing them to pull of feats otherwise not thought possible: such as perceiving attacks aimed at them. This increases their reaction time +1 tier. This lasts for 1 post. Cooldown is 2 posts.
A Rank: "Tiid Klo!" When used the user can see things as if time has slowed down around them, allowing them to pull of feats otherwise not thought possible: such as perceiving attacks aimed at them. This boosts their reaction time +2 tier. This lasts for 2 post. Cooldown is 4 posts.
S Rank: "Tiid Klo Ul!" When used the user can see things as if time has slowed down around them, allowing them to pull of feats otherwise not thought possible: such as perceiving attacks aimed at them. This increases their reaction time +2 tier. This lasts for 3 post. Cooldown is 6 posts.

Name: Dragon Aspect
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B - SS
Type: Supplementary | Defensive
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 - 8 Posts
Cooldown: 4 - 16 Posts
Description: Dragon Aspect is a Thu'um that improves your resistance to damage by creating an armor. The stronger the shout is the stronger that the armor is, the more of the body it covers, and the longer it lasts. This jutsu provides protection against physical attacks as well as jutsu attacks of the rank used and lower.
B Rank: "Mul!" This causes an armor to appear around the users arms that is of B rank in strength. This armor protects against jutsu and physical attacks of B rank and lower. This armor lasts 2 posts. This has a cooldown of 4 posts. This costs 20 chakra first post, and 15 chakra for the second post.
A Rank: "Mul Qah!" This causes an armor to appear around the users arms and head that is of A rank in strength. This armor protects against jutsu and physical attacks of A rank and lower. This armor lasts 4 posts. This has a cooldown of 8 posts. This costs 25 chakra first post, and 20 chakra for each post after.
S Rank: "Mul Qah Diiv!" This causes an armor to appear around the user that covers their entire top half of their body (from the waist and up). This armor protects against jutsu and physical attacks of S rank and lower. This armor lasts 6 posts. This has a cooldown of 12 posts. This costs 30 chakra first post, and 25 chakra for each post after.
SS Rank: "Muh Qah Diiv!" This causes an armor to appear around the user that covers their entire body. This armor protects against SS rank attacks (up to a total of 3). After this limit has been reached it will only protect against S rank attacks and lower. This armor lasts for 8 posts. This has a cooldown of 16 posts. This costs 35 chakra first post, and 30 chakra per post after.

Name: Become Ether
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B - S
Type: Supplementary | Defensive
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 - 3 Posts
Cooldown: 2 - 6 Posts
Description: Become Ethereal is a dragon shout that turns you into an ethereal form. While in this form, you cannot deal damage or take damage (including damage from falls or poison). Attempting to interact with the world, via fighting, accessing a container, or talking to an NPC, causes the effects of the shout to stop working.
B Rank: "Feim" You can become ethereal for up to 1 post, protected against all damage. This costs 40 chakra.
A Rank: "Feim Zii" You can become ethereal for up to 2 posts, protected against all damage. This costs 50 chakra.
S Rank: "Feim Zii Gron" You can become ethereal for up to 3 posts, protected against all damage. This costs 60 chakra.

Slow Time, Dragon Aspect, and Become Ether approved.

Jounin (A-Rank) Posts : 135 Join date : 2015-04-20

Bumping for Bubble Barrier.

Jounin (S-Rank) Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27

Amara wrote:: Name: Bubble Barrier
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C - A
Type: Offensive
Element: Suiton | Raiton
Range: C: 15 Meters | B: 20 Meters | A: 25 Meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: C: 2 Posts | B: 3 Posts | A: 4 Posts
Cooldown: C: 3 Posts | B: 4 Posts: | A: 5 Posts
Description: The user blows out a large amount of raiton infused bubbles. These bubbles surround the user, effectively creating a sort of barrier between themselves and those around that is in a 3 meter radius of the creator. These bubbles are roughly the size of a basketball, and can be spaced as far apart as one foot, or as close together as touching. Once these bubbles are created they cannot be moved or controlled by the creator (save for a wind jutsu, or fanning them in a particular direction, ect.). The damage these bubbles inflict when touched or popped varies depending on their rank. These bubbles will last a specific number of posts depending on their rank, or until they're all popped. Incidentally, the creator of these bubbles is completely immune to damage from them.
C Rank: Bubbles of this rank are capable of causing first degree electrical burns upon contact, per bubble. These burns will roughly be 2 inches in diameter, but only surface deep. (Creates 50 bubbles)
B Rank: Bubbles of this rank are capable of causing second degree electrical burns upon contact, per bubble. Anyone who touches a bubble of this rank will experience a stunning effect of one post. The burns caused by these bubbles will be 2 inches in diameter, and roughly half an inch deep into the skin. Touching, or being touched with more then five bubbles at this rank will cause excessive heart damage and brain damage – if not treated in five posts by a Medic of B rank or higher it will mean certain death. (Creates 75 bubbles)
A Rank: Bubbles of this rank are capable of causing third degree electrical burns upon contact, per bubble. Anyone who touches a bubble of this rank will experience a stunning effect of two posts. The burns caused by these bubbles will be 3 inches in diameter, and roughly half an inch deep into the skin. Touching, or being touched with more then three bubbles at this rank will cause excessive heart damage and brain damage – if not treated in three posts by a Medic of A rank or higher it will mean certain death. (Creates 100 bubbles)

Not bad. Approved.

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