Sepholin [Jutsu Registry]

Name: Rokku
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element:
Range:
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: Lasts until the opponent attempts 3 techniques of at least 3 different ranks.
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: By ingesting chakra infused water, or by having such water enter ear canal or bloodstream, the opponent is susceptible to this genjutsu that can affect the opponents chakra balance. This genjutsu tricks the opponent into not using enough chakra for their techniques so that their techniques are unstable, either backfiring or failing completely.

Name: Go Kibo no Usu Kabe
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Water
Range: 3 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Uses the moisture in the air closest to the user to change the trajectory of incoming attacks, usually to avoid hitting vital spots on the body. The more water within that range, the more distance the attack will be deflected. If that range is completely covered in water, or if the user is submerged, the attack can miss completely. This jutsu can focus on one object or technique at a time and can deflect any amount D rank jutsu. It can completely deflect C rank jutsu up to 2 times and can deflect one B rank jutsu per fight. Although, the amount of times this jutsu can be used is dependent on the amount of chakra the user has left. That is to say, even if a B rank jutsu is completely deflected and another B rank jutsu is used, the user may not be able to completely deflect it without taking any damage, but the core of the ability still applies in that the user will be able to change its trajectory from hitting a vital spot as long as the user has the chakra to do so.

Name: Ame no Tsuiseki
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 10 posts
Cooldown: 15 posts
Description: This jutsu rains over an area using the droplets to track movement in that area. The droplets make the user aware of spatial sense and so without being in direct eyesight, the user can determine specific stimuli from movement as a result of something natural like air/wind.

Name: Illusionary skill: Fuan Surebu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element:
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Genjutsu that raises the opponent anxiety, causing them to second guess every thought and decision, including the potential outcome of the fight, the users behavior and power as well as their own. This delays their reaction time for 3-5 seconds (one post for each action), and will last until broken specifically by a technique that cancels genjutsu. Physical damage will only add to the anxiety as well as the realization that their mobility and reaction time has been hindered. This genjutsu is usually either triggered by the sound of raindrops (provided rain is falling) or by eye contact between the user and the opponent.

Name: Sakkaku no Ame
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 30 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: The user can cause rain to fall from existing clouds or increased moisture in the air, using the chakra infused droplets as a catalyst for a genjutsu of their choice. When the opponent focuses their vision and attempts to look at the user through the rain or after 5 posts of the rain continuously falling on the opponent, they will be caught in a genjutsu. The user posts the intended genjutsu as he uses this technique.

Name: Water Release : Shinkiro
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 5 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or 5 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: This technique can only be used if the user is covered in water. The technique takes advantage of the way natural sunlight is manipulated and bent by water and by being soaked, submerged or otherwise covered in water, a mirage of the user is created, hiding the true position of the user. The user can control the distance of the mirage to the actual user (0-5m) but the mirage will copy the users movements in every way until it is dissipated. Because of the proximity between mirage and user of this technique, experience is needed to collaborate any sounds made by the user and the users voice to be fully convincing as well as the attacking and defending attacks to make the mirage seem real.

Name: Water Release : Chushutsu Mizu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or up to 3 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user can pull the moisture out of the air, ground, materials, and at a close enough distance (within 5 meters) pull moisture from his opponents bodies, allowing him to create water for his techniques where there is none. This water can be gathered by the user or can fall as rain from a cloud. Size of the cloud or sphere of water depends on the environment or amount of water pulled. The severity of which the user extracts his water from can leave objects withered and desolate. Opponents affected by this technique are often left dehydrated, which can lead to fatigue. Fatigue greatly reduces mobility and chakra usage, as well as increased breathing, heart rate and at times anxiety; and can only begin to be restored after replenishing the body's water and will be fully restored after 5 posts.

Name: Water Release : Chushutsu Mizu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or up to 3 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user can pull the moisture out of the air, ground, materials, and at a close enough distance (within 5 meters) pull moisture from his opponents bodies, allowing him to create water for his techniques where there is none. This water can be gathered by the user or can fall as rain from a cloud. Size of the cloud or sphere of water depends on the environment or amount of water pulled. The severity of which the user extracts his water from can leave objects withered and desolate. Opponents affected by this technique lose water through excessive sweating and are often left dehydrated, which can lead to fatigue. Fatigue greatly reduces mobility and chakra usage, as well as increased breathing, heart rate and at times anxiety; and can only begin to be restored after replenishing the body's water and will be fully restored after 5 posts.

Library jutsu: Hidden Mist Jutsu, Water Release: Hiding in Water, Water Release: Poison Mist, Water Prison Jutsu, Suiton Bushin No Jutsu, Azure Stream, Water Release: Water Claw (Suiton: Sui Sou - スイ ソウ) APPROVED.

Illusionary skill: Genso Saikuru APPROVED.


Name: Mizu no Ugoki
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range:
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Modifying the Hiding in Water skill, the user is able to move faster when submerged in water or by using raindrops to boost their speed. Speed is increased by 1 rank for a short time

- Please describe how the Hiding in Water skill is modified by this. Why is the user able to move faster?


Name: Go Kibo no Usu Kabe
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Water
Range: 3 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Uses the moisture in the air closest to the user to change the trajectory of incoming attacks, usually to avoid hitting vital spots on the body. The more water within that range, the more distance the attack will be deflected. If that range is completely covered in water, or if the user is submerged, the attack can miss completely.

- Please limit the ranks of what can be deflected, and how much can be deflected-. This is a D rank deflection jutsu, it's not going to deflect something that's higher than C rank more than once.

Name:  Ame no Tsuiseki
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 100 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 10 posts
Cooldown: 15 posts
Description: This jutsu rains over an area using the droplets to track movement in that area. The intensity of the rain is dependent on the size of the area covered. At 30 meters the rainfall is heavy, at 60 meters the rainfall is moderate, and at 100 meters the rainfall is light. The heavier the rainfall, the easier it is to track an opponent, the lighter the rainfall, the more time it will take. The droplets make the user aware of spatial sense and so without being in direct eyesight, the user can determine specific stimuli from movement as a result of something natural like air/wind.

- The range of this technique is excessive for a D rank jutsu even if the amount of rainfall changes. What you could do is make this a jutsu with different ranges at different rank. The average range for a D rank jutsu is about 15 meters.

Name: Illusionary skill: Fuan Surebu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element:
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Genjutsu that raises the opponent anxiety, causing them to second guess every thought and decision, including the potential outcome of the fight, the users behavior and power as well as their own. This delays their reaction time for one post for each action, and will last until broken. Physical damage will only add to the anxiety as well as the realization that their mobility and reaction time has been hindered.

- How does this jutsu get triggered with the opponent? How much does it delay their reaction time? How does this Genjutsu break if physical damage only adds to anxiety? You have to give your opponent and out.

Name:  Sakkaku no Ame
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 30 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: The user can cause rain to fall from existing clouds or increased moisture in the air, using the chakra infused droplets as a catalyst for a genjutsu of their choice. When the opponent focuses their vision and attempts to look at the user through the rain or after 5 posts of the rain continuously falling on the opponent, they will be caught in a genjutsu.

- This is a good start for a genjutsu, but I'm not sure you'll want it as a separate jutsu as you'll need to post this coupled with whatever jutsu you want your opponent to be caught in doubling your chakra usage. Usually the catalysts are part of the genjutsu.

Name: Water Release : Shinkiro
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 5 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or 5 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: This technique can only be used if the user is covered in water. The technique takes advantage of the way natural sunlight is manipulated and bent by water and by being soaked, submerged or otherwise covered in water, a mirage of the user is created, hiding the true position of the user. The user can control the distance of the mirage to the actual user (0-5m) but the mirage will copy the users movements in every way until it is dissipated. Because of the proximity between mirage and user of this technique, experience is needed to collaborate any sounds made by the user and the users voice to be fully convincing as well as the attacking and defending attacks to make the mirage seem real.

- So... the mirage is essentially a clone? A simple mirage like this would probably be designated a a genjutsu if it's used to make the opponent think that they're fighting (the mirage attacking and defending) something as mirages aren't physical.

Name: Water Release : Chushutsu Mizu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or up to 3 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user can pull the moisture out of the air, ground, materials, and at a close enough distance (within 5 meters) pull moisture from his opponents bodies, allowing him to create water for his techniques where there is none. This water can be gathered by the user or can fall as rain from a cloud. Size of the cloud or sphere of water depends on the environment or amount of water pulled. The severity of which the user extracts his water from can leave objects withered and desolate. Opponents affected by this technique are often left dehydrated, which can lead to fatigue. Fatigue greatly reduces mobility and chakra usage, as well as increased breathing, heart rate and at times anxiety; and can only begin to be restored after replenishing the body's water and will be fully restored after 5 posts.

- Gonna say no to pulling water out of opponents bodies, as this would be severely painful because the human body is mostly water and would definitely need medical ninjutsu to initiate. Ground, air, materials and even plants are fine. But no to humans or animals.

Sasayaki wrote:

Library jutsu: Hidden Mist Jutsu, Water Release: Hiding in Water, Water Release: Poison Mist, Water Prison Jutsu, Suiton Bushin No Jutsu, Azure Stream, Water Release: Water Claw (Suiton: Sui Sou - スイ ソウ) APPROVED.

Illusionary skill: Genso Saikuru APPROVED.


Name: Mizu no Ugoki
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range:
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: The user is able to move faster when submerged in water or by using water to boost their speed. Speed is increased by 1 rank for a short time

- Please describe how the Hiding in Water skill is modified by this. Why is the user able to move faster?

It made sense when I was making it, but it doesn't after i reread it. Besides, it's too similar to Azure Stream. So, I'm fully replacing Mizu no Ugoki with Rokku

Name: Rokku
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element:
Range:
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: Lasts until the opponent attempts 3 techniques of at least 3 different ranks.
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: By ingesting chakra infused water, or by having such water enter ear canal or bloodstream, the opponent is susceptible to this genjutsu that can affect the opponents chakra balance. This genjutsu tricks the opponent into not using enough chakra for their techniques so that their techniques are unstable, either backfiring or failing completely.

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Name: Go Kibo no Usu Kabe
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Water
Range: 3 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Uses the moisture in the air closest to the user to change the trajectory of incoming attacks, usually to avoid hitting vital spots on the body. The more water within that range, the more distance the attack will be deflected. If that range is completely covered in water, or if the user is submerged, the attack can miss completely. This jutsu can focus on one object or technique at a time and can deflect any amount D rank jutsu. It can completely deflect C rank jutsu up to 2 times and can deflect one B rank jutsu per fight. Although, the amount of times this jutsu can be used is dependent on the amount of chakra the user has left. That is to say, even if a B rank jutsu is completely deflected and another B rank jutsu is used, the user may not be able to completely deflect it without taking any damage, but the core of the ability still applies in that the user will be able to change its trajectory from hitting a vital spot as long as the user has the chakra to do so.

- Please limit the ranks of what can be deflected, and how much can be deflected-. This is a D rank deflection jutsu, it's not going to deflect something that's higher than C rank more than once.

I actually meant this to deflect projectiles and weapons, but thanks. I'll change it to include jutsu as well. ^_^

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Name:  Ame no Tsuiseki
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 10 posts
Cooldown: 15 posts
Description: This jutsu rains over an area using the droplets to track movement in that area. The droplets make the user aware of spatial sense and so without being in direct eyesight, the user can determine specific stimuli from movement as a result of something natural like air/wind.

- The range of this technique is excessive for a D rank jutsu even if the amount of rainfall changes. What you could do is make this a jutsu with different ranges at different rank. The average range for a D rank jutsu is about 15 meters.

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Name: Illusionary skill: Fuan Surebu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element:
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Genjutsu that raises the opponent anxiety, causing them to second guess every thought and decision, including the potential outcome of the fight, the users behavior and power as well as their own. This delays their reaction time for 3-5 seconds (one post for each action), and will last until broken specifically by a technique that cancels genjutsu. Physical damage will only add to the anxiety as well as the realization that their mobility and reaction time has been hindered. This genjutsu is usually either triggered by the sound of raindrops (provided rain is falling) or by eye contact between the user and the opponent.

- How does this jutsu get triggered with the opponent? How much does it delay their reaction time? How does this Genjutsu break if physical damage only adds to anxiety? You have to give your opponent and out.

not saying that each post is 3-5 seconds, but i guess it's dependent on the situation.

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Name:  Sakkaku no Ame
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 30 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: The user can cause rain to fall from existing clouds or increased moisture in the air, using the chakra infused droplets as a catalyst for a genjutsu of their choice. When the opponent focuses their vision and attempts to look at the user through the rain or after 5 posts of the rain continuously falling on the opponent, they will be caught in a genjutsu. The user posts the intended genjutsu as he uses this technique.

- This is a good start for a genjutsu, but I'm not sure you'll want it as a separate jutsu as you'll need to post this coupled with whatever jutsu you want your opponent to be caught in doubling your chakra usage. Usually the catalysts are part of the genjutsu.

Double the chakra usage is okay as I want this to be able to be coupled with any genjutsu that I have.

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Name: Water Release : Shinkiro
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 5 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or 5 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: This technique can only be used if the user is covered in water. The technique takes advantage of the way natural sunlight is manipulated and bent by water and by being soaked, submerged or otherwise covered in water, a mirage of the user is created, hiding the true position of the user. The user can control the distance of the mirage to the actual user (0-5m) but the mirage will copy the users movements in every way until it is dissipated. Because of the proximity between mirage and user of this technique, experience is needed to collaborate any sounds made by the user and the users voice to be fully convincing as well as the attacking and defending attacks to make the mirage seem real.

- So... the mirage is essentially a clone? A simple mirage like this would probably be designated a a genjutsu if it's used to make the opponent think that they're fighting (the mirage attacking and defending) something as mirages aren't physical.

Well, it's more of a perception thing (which i get can fall under genjutsu as well) but the user has to physically do things in order to make this seem real. The main difference between this and lets say a water clone, is that the purpose behind this technique is to hide the true position of the user, as the user would be a few meters away from where the opponent thinks he is.

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Name: Water Release : Chushutsu Mizu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or up to 3 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user can pull the moisture out of the air, ground, materials, and at a close enough distance (within 5 meters) pull moisture from his opponents bodies, allowing him to create water for his techniques where there is none. This water can be gathered by the user or can fall as rain from a cloud. Size of the cloud or sphere of water depends on the environment or amount of water pulled. The severity of which the user extracts his water from can leave objects withered and desolate. Opponents affected by this technique lose water through excessive sweating and are often left dehydrated, which can lead to fatigue. Fatigue greatly reduces mobility and chakra usage, as well as increased breathing, heart rate and at times anxiety; and can only begin to be restored after replenishing the body's water and will be fully restored after 5 posts.

- Gonna say no to pulling water out of opponents bodies, as this would be severely painful because the human body is mostly water and would definitely need medical ninjutsu to initiate. Ground, air, materials and even plants are fine. But no to humans or animals.

While 70% of the human body is made of water, i was more referring to the water lost due to sweat. I can make that clearer in my description and I can have the desired fatigue effect without the pain or medical knowhow needed to initiate, seeing as the effects can be reversed just by drinking water

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Name: Rokku
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element:
Range:
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: Lasts until the opponent attempts 3 techniques of at least 3 different ranks.
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: By ingesting chakra infused water, or by having such water enter ear canal or bloodstream, the opponent is susceptible to this genjutsu that can affect the opponents chakra balance. This genjutsu tricks the opponent into not using enough chakra for their techniques so that their techniques are unstable, either backfiring or failing completely.

Name: Go Kibo no Usu Kabe
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Water
Range: 3 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Uses the moisture in the air closest to the user to change the trajectory of incoming attacks, usually to avoid hitting vital spots on the body. The more water within that range, the more distance the attack will be deflected. If that range is completely covered in water, or if the user is submerged, the attack can miss completely. This jutsu can focus on one object or technique at a time and can deflect any amount D rank jutsu. It can completely deflect C rank jutsu up to 2 times and can deflect one B rank jutsu per fight. Although, the amount of times this jutsu can be used is dependent on the amount of chakra the user has left. That is to say, even if a B rank jutsu is completely deflected and another B rank jutsu is used, the user may not be able to completely deflect it without taking any damage, but the core of the ability still applies in that the user will be able to change its trajectory from hitting a vital spot as long as the user has the chakra to do so.

Name:  Ame no Tsuiseki
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 10 posts
Cooldown: 15 posts
Description: This jutsu rains over an area using the droplets to track movement in that area. The droplets make the user aware of spatial sense and so without being in direct eyesight, the user can determine specific stimuli from movement as a result of something natural like air/wind.

Name: Illusionary skill: Fuan Surebu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element:
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Genjutsu that raises the opponent anxiety, causing them to second guess every thought and decision, including the potential outcome of the fight, the users behavior and power as well as their own. This delays their reaction time for 3-5 seconds (one post for each action), and will last until broken specifically by a technique that cancels genjutsu. Physical damage will only add to the anxiety as well as the realization that their mobility and reaction time has been hindered. This genjutsu is usually either triggered by the sound of raindrops (provided rain is falling) or by eye contact between the user and the opponent.

Name:  Sakkaku no Ame
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 30 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: The user can cause rain to fall from existing clouds or increased moisture in the air, using the chakra infused droplets as a catalyst for a genjutsu of their choice. When the opponent focuses their vision and attempts to look at the user through the rain or after 5 posts of the rain continuously falling on the opponent, they will be caught in a genjutsu. The user posts the intended genjutsu as he uses this technique.

Name: Water Release : Shinkiro
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 5 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or 5 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: This technique can only be used if the user is covered in water. The technique takes advantage of the way natural sunlight is manipulated and bent by water and by being soaked, submerged or otherwise covered in water, a mirage of the user is created, hiding the true position of the user. The user can control the distance of the mirage to the actual user (0-5m) but the mirage will copy the users movements in every way until it is dissipated. Because of the proximity between mirage and user of this technique, experience is needed to collaborate any sounds made by the user and the users voice to be fully convincing as well as the attacking and defending attacks to make the mirage seem real.  

Name: Water Release : Chushutsu Mizu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or up to 3 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user can pull the moisture out of the air, ground, materials, and at a close enough distance (within 5 meters) pull moisture from his opponents bodies, allowing him to create water for his techniques where there is none. This water can be gathered by the user or can fall as rain from a cloud. Size of the cloud or sphere of water depends on the environment or amount of water pulled. The severity of which the user extracts his water from can leave objects withered and desolate. Opponents affected by this technique are often left dehydrated, which can lead to fatigue. Fatigue greatly reduces mobility and chakra usage, as well as increased breathing, heart rate and at times anxiety; and can only begin to be restored after replenishing the body's water and will be fully restored after 5 posts.

Name: Water Release : Chushutsu Mizu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post or up to 3 consecutive posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user can pull the moisture out of the air, ground, materials, and at a close enough distance (within 5 meters) pull moisture from his opponents bodies, allowing him to create water for his techniques where there is none. This water can be gathered by the user or can fall as rain from a cloud. Size of the cloud or sphere of water depends on the environment or amount of water pulled. The severity of which the user extracts his water from can leave objects withered and desolate. Opponents affected by this technique lose water through excessive sweating and are often left dehydrated, which can lead to fatigue. Fatigue greatly reduces mobility and chakra usage, as well as increased breathing, heart rate and at times anxiety; and can only begin to be restored after replenishing the body's water and will be fully restored after 5 posts.

Name: Rokku

You need your element and range filled in. Duration would have to be either a chakra drain, or a set amount of posts. You can't have something that's D-rank last like that; it would either have to be a scaling rank jutsu itself, or MUCH higher rank. Otherwise, this isn't bad.


Go Kibo no Usu Kabe

Abolutely not, at D-rank. This would be scaling, to be able to effect ANY rank of weapon/jutsu/etc of those ranks. A jutsu cannot effect items and jutsu of higher rank than itself in this way.


Ame no Tsuiseki

You wouldn't have anything close to that level of perception from a D-rank jutsu. Talk to Jai about this one, he'll be able to give you the appropriate effects for a jutsu like this.


Illusionary skill: Fuan Surebu

Remove the seconds in time. We track everything by post count.


Sakkaku no Ame

Is this basically a guarenteed genjutsu trigger? As in, anyone caught by the controlled rain is automatically caught; within the rules of the genjutsu escape guidelines. How many people at a time can be effected by this?


Water Release : Shinkiro

So this is... basically just you using the natural effects of water bending light to create an illusion jutsu? How large of an area of water do you need to make this work? Are we talking being in a river/pond/lake, or can you create essentially an above ground ball of water for this? The duration doesn't make sense. Is it one post, 5 posts, or can it last UP TO 5 posts, at which point it needs to be a chakra drain duration.


Water Release : Chushutsu Mizu

See above for duration. You realize that outside of basically bloodbending the water out of someone, you can already gather the water you need for jutsu this way, right? As for pulling water from other living animals/humans/chakra beasts/etc, how much, how close do you need to be, and how fast as you gathering it? You also seem to have this jutsu repeating itelf

Name: Rokku
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: /
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: By ingesting chakra infused water, or by having such water enter ear canal or bloodstream, the opponent is susceptible to this genjutsu that can affect the opponents chakra balance. This genjutsu tricks the opponent into not using enough chakra for their techniques so that their techniques are unstable, either backfiring or failing completely.

Name: Water Release : Chushutsu Mizu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: The user can pull the moisture out of the air, ground, materials, steam and ice, allowing him to create water for his techniques where there is none. This water can be gathered by the user or can fall as rain from a cloud. Size of the cloud or sphere of water depends on the environment or amount of water pulled.  The user extracts his water from objects down to a molecular level and the severity often leaves objects withered and desolate.  

Name:  Shi no kokei
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: na
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Genjutsu that tricks the opponent into believing that they've already won. The opponent will see the user in a defeated state, either injured, unconscious or dead. Usually most effective after an opponent has launched an attack. This genjutsu can only affect 1 person at a time and is usually triggered by the sound of rain or by rain falling on an opponent for more than 3 posts

Name: Illusionary skill: Fuan Surebu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element:
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Genjutsu that raises the opponent anxiety, causing them to second guess every thought and decision, including the potential outcome of the fight, the users behavior and power as well as their own. This delays their reaction time by one post for each action, and will last until broken specifically by a technique that cancels genjutsu of this rank. Physical damage will only add to the anxiety as well as the realization that their mobility and reaction time has been hindered. This genjutsu is usually either triggered by the sound of raindrops (provided rain is falling) or by eye contact between the user and the opponent.

Name:  Sakkaku no Ame
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 30 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: The user can cause rain to fall from existing clouds or increased moisture in the air, using the chakra infused droplets as a catalyst for a genjutsu of their choice. This technique can affect multiple people. When the opponent focuses their vision and attempts to look at the user through the rain or after 5 posts of the rain continuously falling on the opponent, they will be caught in a genjutsu. The user posts the intended genjutsu as he uses this technique. If multiple opponents are affected, the user will pay the separate Chaka costs for each person affected by the secondary genjutsu (ie. If person A and person B are affected by Sakkaku no Ame, the user will then cast 2 separate genjutsus on A and B and will have to pay the normal cost of them both)

Name: Water Release : Shinkiro
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 0-5 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: This technique can only be used if the user is covered in water. The technique takes advantage of the way natural sunlight is manipulated and bent by water and by being soaked, submerged or otherwise covered in water, a mirage of the user is created, hiding the true position of the user. The user can control the distance of the mirage to the actual user (0-5m) but the mirage will copy the users movements in every way until it is dissipated. Because of the proximity between mirage and user of this technique, experience is needed to collaborate any sounds made by the user and the users voice to be fully convincing as well as the attacking and defending attacks to make the mirage seem real.  The range of the mirage is based on the circumstance. If the user is submerged in water, the mirage can be up to 5 meters, if it is raining moderately to heavily, the mirage can be up to 3 meters. If it is raining lightly, or if the user is simply soaked, the mirage can be 1 meter away.

Name: Water Release : Oboreru Shimasu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 5 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu
Duration: 3
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Genjutsu that activates by the destruction of a water clone and having the water splashed upon the opponent. For 3 posts, the opponent will believe they are submerged in water, with the waters surface visible, but the more they struggle, the farther away it seems. If the opponent spends the full 3 posts drowning, they will develop a morbid fear of water for an additional 5 posts and will usually see the user of this technique as a water demon (the demon changes based on the opponents individual fear, each opponent will usually see something different). If the rank of this technique is increased, so will it's effects. The technique can last for up to 5 posts at a higher rank and an opponent lasting all 5 posts can die as the mind believes it is drowning. It will also have a cool down of 7 posts if the rank is increased.