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Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
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| Subject: Okami DONE Sun Nov 29, 2015 5:29 am | |
| Basics! Name: Okami Age: 23 Birthdate: July 11th Gender: Male Sexuality: Heterosexual Rank: A-Rank Jonin Village: Amagakure no Sato Element(s): Katon Specialties: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu Special Characteristics: Name: Heterochromia Type: Cosmetic Description: Okami suffers from heterochromia, where his left eye is different from his right. This is due to the seal residing in that eye, the physical reminder that Ochita is sealed within him. Appearance! Height: 5' 7" Weight: 165lbs Hair Color: Black with white streaks Eye Color: Heterochromatic, one is charcoal gray while the other is a hellish red due to a contract made with a dragon long ago. General Description: Long, messy hair frames Okami’s face in spikes as black as night and white as snow. It often shines, but it is a result of grooming and not of grease. It’s very soft, and runs down to his shoulders in a fashion that drives the women of the various villages wild. It radiates nonchalance as it swishes softly in the breeze. His bangs reach his eyes in a perfect way, enhancing their appearance without covering them completely. Out from underneath the flow of obsidian peers a pair of fallen stars, gray and crimson orbs that sparkle in the light. Staring into his soft gaze gives the sensation of melting into them, yet to enemies they bring a searing despair that few can resist. A lazy smile slowly spreads across Okami’s face most often, but can change in a heartbeat to a deep sadness when no one is looking. While fighting, he keeps a calm, controlled demeanor, lest he lose control and hurt his loved ones. When they are in danger, however, the veneer will shatter and turn into a barely-controllable wrath held in check only by his resolve. If one of the few people he cherishes is hurt or killed, a sadistic grin will surface through the pain as he takes his vengeance. Okami stands at an average height for a Shinobi. His arm muscles are highly pronounced from countless years of training, while the rest of him is not large and bulky like a bear, but not slim and lean like a cat. Rather, he seems to take after his namesake, the wolf. His skin has color, but isn’t tanned. His hands look strong, and can often be found spinning a knife or playing with the hilt of a sword. His youthful appearance isn’t just skin deep, as he radiates an abundance of excess life-force and has nearly-zero attention span. His appearance is made complete by a startling white smile, that brightens up the room even as depression reigns supreme. He is almost always smiling in the same way, as he believes that if you cannot smile anymore, you have lost the will to live. His voice is a soothing baritone, full of love and strength unmatched and undiminished by time. Even those who have lost everything will find solace within that undeniable charm. Despair seems to wash away with the tide of Okami's will, and has no place in the hearts of those around him. About You! Personality: Okami is typically relaxed and easy-going, quickly forgiving those who wrong him. This is not because he is too trusting, however. He is an amazing judge of character, and can often tell when someone is lying without even monitoring for changes in Chakra. When meeting new people Okami can seem a bit shy, but he really tries hard to force himself out of his comfort area. This, however, occasionally results in anxiety attacks, which really doesn’t help at all. He doesn’t have many friends, but he would die to protect those few he has. Whenever he’s around them, he can truly let his guard down, which is a rare thing for him. While he does enjoy a good fight, Okami is not one to waste time extending them. He dispatches his enemies quickly and hates long, drawn out battles. He has much respect for most of his opponents, and honors their valor before killing them so that they know he harbors no ill will. When a loved one is at risk or killed, however, Okami is utterly merciless and sadistic. At that point he will unleash his full power, and is determined to tear apart whoever stands between him and his loved one. While fighting against someone on an equal level, he will often escalate his Chakra as the fight dictates so that he doesn’t exhaust himself, as not even he can withstand the full force of his own power. However, if an opponent is stronger than him, Okami will put his full force into his opening blows to harry his enemy’s advance and prevent them from using their own techniques. Okami, while he does have close friends, can sometimes lock himself in his quarters for hours at a time in an attempt to be alone. The loneliness that engulfs him is a result of his sense of duty and the self-sacrifices he makes for his loved ones. This misery he feels is all-consuming and he blames himself for anything and everything that happens to them. He is reluctant to break his code of honor even if ordered to do so, as he fears that if he does he will lose his friends, family, and perhaps even his sanity. When around women, the esteemed man changes slightly. His aloof behavior becomes even more pronounced, and his judgment tends to err more often. He is a severe romantic, and will often attempt to woo those that catch his eye. He is undeniably straight, however, and this never wavers. Okami's ideal woman varies, as he views each as a unique work of art, valued in their own way. His training regimen is strict, involving both physical and emotional strengthening. Okami spends several hours each day on swordplay, perfecting his kata and assisting his already peerless skill. After this, he spends another hour in meditation. This routine hasn't changed once since his days in the Academy, as he is very, very adverse to change. He will fight it with all his might, given the opportunity. History: Born to the then Head of the Clan, Okami was an only child. He was born in early July, on a Full Moon. His mother, Kitsune, had been in a violent labor for three days, and every minute of it saw her chakra drained more and more. She would scream, and the clan would cry with her, for he had no known father. Blood covered every inch of the bed, and the midwives were confused as to what was happening. Among the noble houses his family were known for being born with unnaturally high chakra levels, and thus had the most violent births. Yet, this was different. The very ground under the bed splintered from the force of her contractions, and several nurses and doctors had to be carried out and treated for comas and shattered bones. The crescendo had come at midnight. She gave the final push, and Okami made his way into the world…at the cost of his mother. His upbringing was shrouded with pain and horror. Their noble standing was tenuous, as multiple other clans wished for their downfall so that they could rise. Okami had been adopted by his aunt, who loved him as her own. The other members of the clan, however, did not see eye to eye with her. They demanded that she send the young child to an outer village, where no one would care if he killed anyone in a fit of pique. Even though he was the last descendant of the Head Family other than his Aunt, he was considered to be much too dangerous for anyone to care for. An old seer in the clan foretold that if he lived, disaster would fall upon the various branches of the family. Attempts were made on his life quite often, and he was rejected by the other children his age. In order to teach him control to prove the others wrong, his Aunt conspired in secret to have him trained in kenjutsu by the best when he was six. He then spent many years of his childhood bouncing from dojo to dojo, never quite fitting in with the other students, yet always at the top of his class. Eventually, Okami became weary of learning how to use a sword but not being able to utilize his skills. He went home after around five years of being away to tell his Aunt that he wanted to become a Shinobi. As he strode home, he saw a burning light fall to the ground a few miles away. Running towards it, he found it sitting there, waiting to be picked up. The chakra being exuded from the light was immense, so much so that the young Okami was soon enthralled by it. Walking over towards it, he picked up the strange orb, around the size of a marble. It was almost the consistency of jelly, but retained its shape as he moved it to and fro. Lifting it to his mouth, he wondered idly what it tasted like. A massive blast of energy coursed through his body the moment it touched his lips, causing him to drop it onto the ground. Picking it back up, he popped it into his mouth and swallowed it whole, upon which a searing pain shot through the young boy. Falling to the earth, he began to convulse, the pain not letting up until finally, blessedly, he fell asleep. When he opened his eyes, he stood upon a plateau high in the heavens, before a shining silver Tien Lung. The dragon shifted its massive head, regarding the boy coldly. "So," It said, "You have come to take my power. You would have me live in your body, eat your food, sleep in your mind until you are ready to wield me? Ha. Young one, you have the potential, else you would not have survived the sealing, but I cringe to think that I would bow down so easily. Why should I, when all you would do is use me for your race's petty wars and squabbles. No, I think that if I were to go with you, I could guide you to the path you are fated to walk. Fine then. I shall finish the seal, then we shall be partners. At least, we will be once you are capable of wielding my power." The next day, Okami woke up to find himself in a dorm room with multiple older boys. The blanket he had been covered with when he was found was sitting at the foot of the bed, folded neatly next to a white uniform with blue trim. Picking up a note that sat next to it, a grieving moan tore itself from his lips as Okami read the sorrowful explanation. His Aunt had passed away years ago, and the family member that had found him had enrolled him in the local Academy. Storing the letter safely in the foot locker at the end of his bunk next to his blanket, Okami put on the Academy uniform and belted on the katana granted to him. The older students watched as he fumbled with the sleeves that were much too long, until one walked over and ripped them off for him, helping him fit the rest of the troublesome uniform on. He was one of them, and they took care of their own. Over the next few months, Okami began to change. His demeanor brightened, from acting aloof and uncaring to being more open and friendly. The other students thought of him as an enigma, as he was placed in the Special Advanced Class immediately upon taking the test, despite his age. However, they were universally kind and helpful to him for a time, as the members of his dorm told others about the night he was brought in. After several weeks, Okami soon hit the growth spurt expected of every twelve-year old. Conveniently, that was around the time that combat training started for the Special Advanced students. The students would spar against each other and against the occasional instructor. Throughout this time period, Okami was constantly berated by the head instructor, who everyone referred to as Old Jinto. According to Jinto, Okami’s method of fighting was off-kilter and flawed compared to the rest of the class. During his 8th month at the academy, Okami heard rumors of an exam that, if passed, allowed the student to graduate early. To the young man, this sounded like a dream come true. Old Jinto had made his life a living nightmare by this time, taunting him, turning other students against him, and having his posse, a gang of Sixth-Years, beat him to a bloody pulp. Going to the main study hall, Okami sought out the instructor responsible for the exam. Signing up for it, he learned that the test itself consisted of only one thing: He must defeat Old Jinto in full combat. At hearing what the exam entailed, a slow, sadistic smile spread across Okami’s face that sent chills down the spines of more than one instructor while the other students cowered and ran. He was going to enjoy this. RP Sample: Okami, dressed in his usual garb of black pants and long sleeved black shirt with a white flak jacket over it, would leap from building to building stealthily, headband tied loosely around his neck and kunai blade slung over his back. It was back to the grind, 2 days after his mission to protect Miss Hai, and he was again tasked to kill. He was fully loaded, and was on the hunt for Hayato Mamush, the lord of a crime syndicate that sprung up recently. There was a rumor that he was passing through the Port of Dreams, staying in a bar called The Sleeping Dog. Getting there was a chore, as it was on the west side of the port city, and Okami was STILL sore from his previous missions. Breathing lightly but harshly, he would stop a moment, orienting himself before sniffing the air. There was a faint smell of blood, sweat, and sex directly below him, meaning he had gotten to the right place, as the Sleeping Dog was a renowned brothel. Dropping off the rooftop, Okami would then walk in, smoke from a hookah blasting him in the face as he stalked into the main room. Seeing several other shinobi surrounded by women, he slowly shook his head before turning to the bartender. Ordering a soda, he would wave off a pair of girls that decided he was a decent mark. Turning to the bartender, he would ask under his breath where the crime lord was, and the bartender would motion him upstairs. Finishing his drink, he offered to pay the man, who politely declined with a statement that members of the military got free drinks every night past 6. Walking upstairs, Okami noted the tasteful décor and good construction of the building. No wonder it was so popular. The women were all well dressed, and the place was classy. Stepping into the first room on the right, as instructed, he soon noticed something was amiss. His suspicions were proved when a light came on and 9 men were standing in the spacious area. All had weapons drawn, facing him, and the four in front charged. Adhering to the tenets of Iaido, he slashed through the first one with ease. The second swung at him, and he toyed with the boy for a moment before dispatching him with a quick slash to the throat. Killing them all was no problem for him at the moment, as he was capable of compartmentalizing his thoughts. They were the enemy, no matter their face, no matter their age. If they had to die, so be it. Kicking at another of the Genin, he heard the distinct sound of ribs breaking as he flew into the wall. Moving on to the last one, he sliced once, twice, three times, severing both hands and bringing the sword down into his torso from his shoulder. It saddened him that he had to kill his opponents, but they were in his way of the cowardly man sitting in the back of the room. Faceclaim: Sasaki Haise, Tokyo Ghoul:re
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| | | Karukaya Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27
| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Mon Nov 30, 2015 11:47 pm | |
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- Name: Ryū no Me (Eye of the Dragon)
Type: Doujutsu Requirements: Unique to Okami Ability Tier: Tier 3 Minimum Rank: Jonin (A) Description: Okami gained this ability as a young boy, permanently changing his left eye to a burning red. By drawing upon the Heavenly Dragon sealed within him, Okami can physically see the weft and flow of Chakra, and granting him SS-2 in Chakra due to drawing upon both his own natural reserves and that of the Dragon. Alright, I'm glad I glanced at this when I did. Now then, I wanna clarify some things before I approve or deny this SC. 1. Is this a /dragon/, a chakra beast, or a Bijuu (tailed beast)? They are very different things here; as we have modified lore and such that makes for different requirements for the three. 2. This would be a Tier 4 || Legendary level SC, because of the sheer boost to your chakra pool you're getting. Technically, we treat chakra gained from a beast sealed into a character different than the Chakra stat. You normally get extra chakra just from the beast sealing, beyond the chakra stat. | |
| | | Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
Posts : 101 Join date : 2015-11-29
| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 12:33 am | |
| It's either a chakra beast or a Bijuu, depending on what's okay with you, I guess. If I could get a Tailed Beast status for it, that would be great. I'm still a little iffy on the skills, but I'm trying my best. What is the difference between the Chakra Skill and the Chakra Pool? | |
| | | Karukaya Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27
| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 1:44 am | |
| Chakra Stat and chakra pool are different in the following ways: Chakra pool is the base chakra amount everyone has, regardless of extra abilities, beasts, items, etc. Everyone's base pool is determined by their rank (EX: D-Rank have 400 base, C-Rank 500, etc). Chakra Stat is a modifier that can be used to give a permanent increase in how much chakra you have. This is a trained modifier, and at SS-3 rank grants a total of 200 additional chakra. Because this is a stat, the rank it can be trained to is limited by your character rank (Genin max at D-3, etc). Chakra beasts, and by extension Bijuu (tailed beasts) are entities that exist in the world separate from either of these. They are constructs of chakra, and as such are able to use chakra based abilities, similar to ninja and samurai. Chakra beasts are the common beasts you see; these include animals similar to the Inuzuka clan dogs, or any ninja pet with abilities beyond that of a normal animal. Bijuu are extremely rare; and significantly more powerful. Now, Bijuu as you understand them do not exist on this site. We have a system that will be released that will introduce a beast similar in nature to them, but they won't exactly be bijuu. Chakra beasts exist naturally, and as such can be captured, tamed, and sealed, whenever you like; however they must be apped and approved in the same manner as all ninja pets before you can go about taming them and sealing them. Can you give me more information about the beast you have? I can give you the proper information you need to app it properly; as well as if you are able to start with it outright or not. Either way, you'll need to generate a pet sheet for it, once you've been approved; and that's the extra information I'd be giving you. If you want an example of ninja pets/chakra beasts, see Coen (combat ninja pet/chakra beast) and Roku (support/sensory pet, dragon spirit beast) here: https://ninjaballad.rpg-board.net/t166-karukaya-locker | |
| | | Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
Posts : 101 Join date : 2015-11-29
| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 8:00 am | |
| Okami is supposed to have had the dragon/chakra beast/whatever sealed within him as a young boy, when he found a fallen star and ate it, bringing him into contact with the dragon himself. While originally sealed within the fallen star, both the star and the dragon fused with Okami's budding chakra pool, where the star became a fuuinjutsu much like that of a Jinchuuriki's, sealing the Heavenly Dragon within the young boy. The dragon itself is supposed to be on par with a Bijuu in strength, if not one himself. He is made up primarily of Yang chakra, as evidenced by Okami's eye, where the seal mark is. I'd consider most of his power manifesting itself in a similar fashion to the Sharingan or the Rinnegan, where he can physically see and manipulate chakra through the use of his eye. It could even be a thing where he is slowly going blind whenever he overuses his more powerful abilities AKA S-Rated or above custom abilities that are channeled through the eye. Now, the Jinchuuriki portion of it is where it gets interesting, as I was hoping to have something similar to a Tailed Beast Ball and a chakra cloak, but if I can't right off the bat that's okay, since I was planning on training for that anyway. | |
| | | Karukaya Jounin (S-Rank)
Posts : 682 Join date : 2015-03-27
| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 8:53 am | |
| That is very... Calcifer, in nature right there. Alright, you would basically; by our systems, have an elemental avatar spirit. Minor, by the classification of our system, but that's not a reflection of power in and as much as just that it was able to be tamed and sealed at all. Hmmm.
Starting with it sealed /is/ possible; for fluff sake; but you would have to basically train from the ground (with some freebie starting abilities/effects) up to unlock the abilities granted by it. In essence, you would need to slowly work up to unlocking the abilities via interactions with the sealed beast in IC threads, trainings, apping and training jutsu, etc. Pretty much what you had planned. We have the ability to 'evolve', in a sense, your combat pets and what not; they're never outright fixed in strength so long as you work with them and train them (the pets I linked you to both started out as D-rank, in fact the dragon spirit started literally as an egg), so weakness only lasts until the effort is put in to correct it.
As for the reaction you physically have to sealing (the mentioned blindness), that is totally possible, although it wouldn't be outright required. As for the abilities manifesting in a manner similar to Sharingan and Rinnegan, again, those abilities would have to be apped as jutsu and secondary SCs, to be approved after your character is approved. They are allowed, just not as initial starting abilities.
The way our system works is, you can basically get just about anything (within reason), so long as you are willing to put in the IC effort to 'discover' it. You put in the work to create and train and discover the abilities IC, and you're allowed to have it. The only real restriction is on the canon clan KKG Doujutsu such as (exact) Sharingan/Rinnegan/Byakugan; because those bloodlines don't exist in 'our world' (this is part of the AU of the site), you can't have them exactly, however most of the abilities of them are extraordinarily easy to get naturally (EX: most of the sharingan perception abilities are naturally granted by having a high REA stat, the copy ability can be created with a little work; Byakugan's clarity is REA and the fighting style is simple Taijutsu; we have many of the 'legendary' jutsu such as Susano'o written as event jutsu that are pretty easy to get, etc) . | |
| | | Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 9:20 am | |
| THANK YOU!!! Someone else gets it XD | |
| | | Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 9:48 am | |
| So, what sort of abilities and effects would I have to train, and what would I be allowed to start with?
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| | | Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 3:32 pm | |
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| | | Karukaya Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 6:47 pm | |
| We'd be working out the abilities while working out the final approval for the pet. ~
You're missing your specialty and village.
Beyond that, this is workable for the rank and such that you want.
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| | | Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 7:04 pm | |
| Awesome! I got those things written up. Now, where do I apply for the pet? | |
| | | Karukaya Jounin (S-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Tue Dec 01, 2015 11:25 pm | |
| Approved.
Additional information will be sent via PM. | |
| | | Sasayaki Genin
Posts : 70 Join date : 2015-06-26
| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Mon Dec 07, 2015 12:36 pm | |
| Staff is about to have a serious discussion about your app. At this moment you are in need of re-approval. Please hold on any rps that you are currently in at the moment. I apologize for the inconvenience. | |
| | | Neo Genin
Posts : 24 Join date : 2015-12-07
| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Mon Dec 07, 2015 4:45 pm | |
| Alright. Karu and I have gone over your character app and there are several things that need to be edited/changed.
- First and foremost you cannot have that SC whether it's on your character app or your beast write up until you learn it from Jai. It's a technique he has had a jutsu version of for months now and anything custom is locked to the user who created it and left at their discretion as to who gets it and can learn it. So, if you wish to have it that'll be something you have to speak to Jai about. We apologize for this being a last minute thing but we literally all blanked on Jai having the ability up until it was mentioned.
- Next thing I'd like to touch on: it's more of a reminder than anything: is that while you can keep the beast sealing as part of your history I want to reiterate that you will have to do flashback threads of having the beast sealed inside of you by someone who actually has the appropriate rank of Fuuinjutsu (this means someone with Fuuinjutsu of your beasts rank or higher).
- Finally. Your RP sample has to reflect your character. You cannot use an RP sample from another site. You have to create a fresh one about the character you are apping. The only time we allow people to use RP samples not about their character is when they're using a post they created on this site with another pre-standing character.
Please make all the necessary changes and then bump your app once those have been completed. | |
| | | Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Mon Dec 07, 2015 4:56 pm | |
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| | | Neo Genin
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Mon Dec 07, 2015 8:33 pm | |
| Doujutsu have to be written as actual jutsu that require chakra to maintain. You cannot take them as SC's at all. | |
| | | Okami Jounin (A-Rank)
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| | | Neo Genin
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| Subject: Re: Okami DONE Mon Dec 07, 2015 8:48 pm | |
| Alright, I see nothing wrong with this anymore and therefore you are: | |
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